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you borrowed a friend's gold watch to a party. Unfortunately, the watch fell off your wrist and you lost it. Write a letter to the owner of the watch. In your letter, apologize for the loss, explain what happened, tell him what you want to do about it.

you borrowed a friend's gold watch to a party. Unfortunately, the watch fell off your wrist and you lost it. Write a letter to the owner of the watch. In your letter, apologize for the loss, explain what happened, tell him what you want to do about it. MByep
Dear Jones, I regret to inform you that the gold watch I borrowed from you got lost. I’m using this medium to apologize for the unfortunate loss of this wrist watch. It wasn’t intentional. It all happened yesterday in the morning, I left my house for the party at Victoria Island, the commercial vehicle I boarded from Snake Island had flat tire. All the passengers alighted from the motor for the driver to change the deflated tire. Suddenly, we started hearing gun shots from different angles, people began to run for their lives. As I was running, I didn’t know when the watch fell of my hand. It was a terrible experience but glory be to God for the plans of devil didn’t prevail. Dear friend, by tomorrow, I will like to come and pay you a visit because I just received my salary so that we can go for shopping in a nearby Supper Market to check for some nice items that will be of a choice. Once again, sorry for the loss of the wrist watch. Kind regards, Samuel.
Dear Jones,

I regret to inform you that the gold
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watch
I borrowed from you
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got
lost. I’m using this medium to apologize for the unfortunate loss of this wrist
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watch
. It wasn’t intentional.

It all happened yesterday in the morning, I
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left
my
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house
for the party at Victoria Island, the commercial vehicle I boarded from Snake Island had flat tire. All the passengers alighted from the motor for the driver to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the deflated tire.
Suddenly
, we
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started
hearing gun shots from
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different
angles,
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people
began to run for their
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lives
. As I was running, I didn’t know when the
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watch
fell of my hand. It was a terrible experience
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but
glory be to God for the plans of devil didn’t prevail.

Dear friend, by tomorrow, I
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will
like to
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come
and pay you a visit
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because
I
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just
received my salary
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so
that we can go for shopping in a nearby Supper Market to
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check
for
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some
nice items that will be of a choice.

Once again, sorry for the loss of the wrist
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watch
.

Kind regards, Samuel.
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IELTS letter you borrowed a friend's gold watch to a party. Unfortunately, the watch fell off your wrist and you lost it. Write a letter to the owner of the watch. In your letter, apologize for the loss, explain what happened, tell him what you want to do about it.

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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