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Your friend recently moved to the same town you live in. Writing a letter to invite him/her to go to the gym together. In your letter – Say why you go to this gym – Explain why you think it is suitable for your friend – Say what part of this gym you recommend

Your friend recently moved to the same town you live in. Writing a letter to invite him/her to go to the gym together. In your letter – Say why you go to this gym – Explain why you think it is suitable for your friend – Say what part of this gym you recommend w7QNl

Dear amok, I hope this letter find you and your family in good health. I am delighted to know about that you have moved in my town. To further express my joy, I want you to join gym with me so we can do some exercise together. The name of the gym is splash which is situated in our town. It provides huge range of fitness and exercise equipment such as treadmills, exercise bikes, spin bikes and so on, which results to transform your life. Moreover, the trainer is very friendly, and he has wealth of knowledge about the modern equipment and discounts is also offered by them especially to the students. It is very convenient for you as well. As you are more concerned about health, you might obtain countless benefits to join this gym. Also, it opens 24*7 days, then you can go at any time whatever time suits to you. I would like to suggest you join cardio part because it is very beginner friendly area. As you do not have adequate knowledge about other gadgets so this would be effective for you. I can’t wait to hear from you. Your Friend Preet

Dear amok,

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good
 health. I am delighted
 to know about that you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in my town. To further
 express my joy, I want you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 gym with me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 exercise together.

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so
 on, which results to transform your life. Moreover
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very
 friendly, and he has wealth of knowledge about the modern equipment and discounts is also
 offered by them especially
 to the students.

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 convenient for you as well
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join
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 days, then you can go at any time whatever time suits to you.

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join
 cardio part This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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very
 beginner friendly area. As you do not have adequate knowledge about other gadgets This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 this would be effective for you.

I can’t wait to hear from you.

Your Friend

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