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Your friend recently moved to the same town you live in. Writing a letter to invite him/her to go to the gym together. In your letter – Say why you go to this gym – Explain why you think it is suitable for your friend – Say what part of this gym you recommend

Your friend recently moved to the same town you live in. Writing a letter to invite him/her to go to the gym together. In your letter – Say why you go to this gym – Explain why you think it is suitable for your friend – Say what part of this gym you recommend w7QNl
Dear amok, I hope this letter find you and your family in good health. I am delighted to know about that you have moved in my town. To further express my joy, I want you to join gym with me so we can do some exercise together. The name of the gym is splash which is situated in our town. It provides huge range of fitness and exercise equipment such as treadmills, exercise bikes, spin bikes and so on, which results to transform your life. Moreover, the trainer is very friendly, and he has wealth of knowledge about the modern equipment and discounts is also offered by them especially to the students. It is very convenient for you as well. As you are more concerned about health, you might obtain countless benefits to join this gym. Also, it opens 24*7 days, then you can go at any time whatever time suits to you. I would like to suggest you join cardio part because it is very beginner friendly area. As you do not have adequate knowledge about other gadgets so this would be effective for you. I can’t wait to hear from you. Your Friend Preet
Dear amok,

I hope this letter find you and your family in
good
health. I
am delighted
to know about that you have
moved
in my town. To
further
express my joy, I want you to
join
gym with me
so
we can do
some
exercise together.

The name of the gym is splash which
is situated
in our town. It provides huge range of fitness and exercise equipment such as treadmills, exercise bikes, spin bikes and
so
on, which results to transform your life.
Moreover
, the trainer is
very
friendly, and he has wealth of knowledge about the modern equipment and discounts is
also
offered by them
especially
to the students.

It is
very
convenient for you
as well
. As you are more concerned about health, you might obtain countless benefits to
join
this gym.
Also
, it opens
24*7
days, then you can go at any time whatever time suits to you.

I would like to suggest you
join
cardio part
because
it is
very
beginner friendly area. As you do not have adequate knowledge about other gadgets
so
this would be effective for you.

I can’t wait to hear from you.

Your Friend

Preet
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IELTS letter Your friend recently moved to the same town you live in. Writing a letter to invite him/her to go to the gym together. In your letter – Say why you go to this gym – Explain why you think it is suitable for your friend – Say what part of this gym you recommend

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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