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Dear Kylie, How was your first week at the university? Are you doing great? My first week at Greenwich was fantastic. My classmates and teachers were very friendly and nice to me. I know it may be too soon to ask but did you think about your future? Did you have a plan for it? I did. I think in the future after I graduated, I will go out and find some jobs. I want to do more than 2 jobs to take more experience and earn more money. I like freedom so I think I will not get married right away. I would love to go to many places to learn more things from all over the world. I don't want to be someone that special or something, just want to be myself and enjoy every moment with my family and my friends. And until I think it was enough I will find my partner.

Dear Kylie,

How was your first
 week at the university? Are you doing great? My first
 week at Greenwich was fantastic. My classmates and teachers were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 friendly and nice to me. I know it may be too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 to ask This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 did you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 about your future? Did you have a plan for it? I did.

I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 in the future after I graduated, I will go out and find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 jobs. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want to do more than 2 jobs to take more experience and earn more money. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 like freedom This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 I will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 married right away. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to go to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 places to learn more things from all over the world. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 don't want to be someone that special or something, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 want to be myself and enjoy every moment with my family and my friends. And until I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 I will find my partner. 