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you always go to a restaurant for your company meetings and enjoy, but this time you faced some problems there. write a letter to the manager of that restaurant describing what problems you faced and suggesting solutions.

you always go to a restaurant for your company meetings and enjoy, but this time you faced some problems there. write a letter to the manager of that restaurant describing what problems you faced and suggesting solutions. kx9BN
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Dhairya Bhatt, a member of Zedus Publications, which organises weekly meetings at your restaurant, Zodiac Bistro. I am writing to express my displeasure over our recent meal there and to suggest some improvements. Our firm organises a weekly dinner meet with our clients, at your eatery. We all really enjoy every time we visit there. But last time, some things went horribly wrong! The waiter serving us was extremely rude and clumsy. Also, long delays were caused in the services, even after repeated requests were made. Further, when the food finally arrived, it wasn’t cooked properly, and some of it was not according to the order placed. Our clients were really upset by the mess created and left disappointed. We suffered losses due to the same, as well. Hence, I suggest you to please deploy that waiter, and employ some well-mannered and courteous staff members. Also I wish to suggest you to keep a watch on the food being prepared, and whether the order placed is being carried out properly should also be verified. Doing this can help you to maintain faithful customers like us and attract many new ones also. Hope you will take the suggestions into consideration! Yours Faithfully, Dhairya Bhatt
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
Dhairya
Bhatt
, a member of
Zedus
Publications, which
organises
weekly meetings at your restaurant, Zodiac Bistro. I am writing to express my displeasure over our recent meal there and to suggest
some
improvements.

Our firm
organises
a weekly dinner
meet
with our clients, at your eatery. We all
really
enjoy every time we visit there.
But
last time,
some
things went
horribly
wrong
! The waiter serving us was
extremely
rude and clumsy.
Also
, long delays
were caused
in the services, even after repeated requests
were made
.
Further
, when the food
finally
arrived, it wasn’t cooked
properly
, and
some
of it was not according to the order placed. Our clients were
really
upset by the mess created and
left
disappointed. We suffered losses due to the same,
as well
.

Hence
, I suggest you to
please
deploy that waiter, and employ
some
well-mannered and courteous staff members.
Also
I wish to suggest you to
keep
a
watch
on the food
being prepared
, and whether the order placed is
being carried
out
properly
should
also
be verified
. Doing this can
help
you to maintain faithful customers like us and attract
many
new ones
also
.

Hope you will take the suggestions into consideration!

Yours
Faithfully
,

Dhairya
Bhatt
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IELTS letter you always go to a restaurant for your company meetings and enjoy, but this time you faced some problems there. write a letter to the manager of that restaurant describing what problems you faced and suggesting solutions.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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