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share the housework with my family

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hello everyone. I want to ask you one question. How many people here share the household chore's with your families? about me, I really like sharing the housework with my family. At home, I responsible for the washing up, do the laundry, cleaning the house. I can learn a lot from doing household chores. Doing household chore's helps me learn about what I need to do to care for myselfs, for a home and a family. Being involved in housework also gives me experience of relationship skills like communicating clearly, negotiating, cooperating and working as a team.
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hello
everyone. I want to ask you one question. How
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people
here share the household chore's with your families?
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about
me, I
really
like sharing the housework with my family. At home, I responsible for the washing up, do the laundry, cleaning the
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. I can learn a lot from doing household chores. Doing household chore's
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helps
me learn about what I need to do to care for
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myselfs
, for a home and a family.
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in housework
also
gives me experience of relationship
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skills
like communicating
clearly
, negotiating, cooperating and working as a team.
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IELTS letter share the housework with my family

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  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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