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share the housework with my family

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hello everyone. I want to ask you one question. How many people here share the household chore's with your families? about me, I really like sharing the housework with my family. At home, I responsible for the washing up, do the laundry, cleaning the house. I can learn a lot from doing household chores. Doing household chore's helps me learn about what I need to do to care for myselfs, for a home and a family. Being involved in housework also gives me experience of relationship skills like communicating clearly, negotiating, cooperating and working as a team.

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IELTS letter share the housework with my family

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American English

1 paragraphs

97 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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