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You had lost contact with a friend. But you managed to get his contact lately and decide to write a letter

You had lost contact with a friend. But you managed to get his contact lately and decide to write a letter kx9be
Dear Amandeep, I am fine and I hope you are also doing well. I am very happy because I got your contact and address. Last Sunday, I went in the delhi and meet to our raj friend and I got your contact from them. Luckly I got your contact. Raj told me, nowadays you find a job. And I join a cancer hospital in jalandhar and there are lots of vaccancies today so I want to you join with me same job. Because we have a same study and easy to do a job togather. Moreover the hospital staff is very cooperative and friendly as well as doctors also. They give aa well pay scale. Which is beneficial for you. What are you doing nowadays. And complete your study right now. And if your interested this job send me a resume copy. I will push the resume. My regards your mom and dad as well as younger sister. Waiting from hearing you. Warm wishes, Karmjeet kaur.
Dear Amandeep,

I am fine and I hope you are
also
doing
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. I am
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very
happy
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because
I
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your contact and address. Last Sunday, I went in the
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delhi
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meet
to our
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raj
friend and I
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got
your contact from them.

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I
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your contact. Raj
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told
me, nowadays you find a
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job
. And I
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join
a cancer hospital in
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jalandhar
and there are lots of
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vaccancies
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today
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so
I want to you
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join
with me same
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job
.
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Because
we have a same study and easy to do a
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job
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togather
.
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Moreover
the hospital staff is
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very
cooperative and friendly as
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well
as doctors
also
. They give
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aa
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well
pay scale. Which is beneficial for you.

What are you doing nowadays. And complete your study right
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now
. And if your interested this
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job
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send
me a resume copy. I will push the resume.

My regards your mom and dad as
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well
as younger sister.

Waiting from hearing you.

Warm wishes,

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Karmjeet
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kaur
.
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IELTS letter You had lost contact with a friend. But you managed to get his contact lately and decide to write a letter

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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