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your landloard , repair a work that your rented apartment , you found some problem.

your landloard, repair a work that your rented apartment, you found some problem. 5BqdD

Dear John, Hope all are well! . When i walking last day i saw some technicians three to five peoples works that my rented apartment. I thought you already told my home phone due to my phone is not working. Then i go home and ask my wife Mr John said something. she said nothing. latterly i found i repair bathroom commode and fix it. But this apartment when we are doing repairing work we need to get approval. there is some form we need to fil and give it. So this is the reason. please consider this matter.

Dear John, Hope all are well! Don't put a space before the full stop.
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“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 walking last day Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 technicians three to five peoples works that my rented apartment. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 you already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 my home phone due to my phone is not working. Then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 go home and ask my wife Mr John said something. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
 said nothing. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLatterly
latterly
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 found Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 repair bathroom commode and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 this apartment when we are doing repairing work we need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 approval. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 form we need to Possible spelling mistake found.filmoilfilefillfitfail
fil
 and give it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 this is the reason. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPlease
please
 consider this matter. 

IELTS letter your landloard, repair a work that your rented apartment, you found some problem.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

99 words

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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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