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Write an email to describe your health problem

Write an email to describe your health problem y72el
Dear Kylie, How are you? Winter is coming, it’s started cold here. How is the weather in the USA? The weather is changing very fast and continuously that why I am feeling not well these days. Until yesterday I had the flu. From the morning, when I woke up I felt a little headache and my throat was very sore. My nose was running, I felt so bad and don't want to eat anything. I was also scared if I have had covid. But luckily it was just the normal flu.
Dear Kylie,

How are you? Winter is coming, it’s
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started
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cold
here. How is the weather in the USA? The weather is changing
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very
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fast
and
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that why I am feeling not well these days.
“Until” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Until
The comma is probably missing here: "yesterday, I".
yesterday I
had the flu.

From the morning, when I woke up I felt a
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little
headache and my throat was
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very
sore. My nose was running, I felt
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so
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bad
and don't want to eat anything. I was
also
scared if I have had
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
.
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But
luckily it was
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just
the normal flu.
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IELTS letter Write an email to describe your health problem

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
91 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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