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you have recently bought a cassette player but it does not work properly.write a letter of complaint

you have recently bought a cassette player but it does not work properly. write a letter of complaint 2bdPj
Dear sir, I am writing in the hope that you can help me with a problem regarding cassette player that I recently bought. On may 10 I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a cassette player for my husband. Looking around the shop I encountered exoected items and I asked a sho assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Two days later, my husband said about the problems of the item. When he used the cassette player for the first time, it worked properly and the voice of it was clear, also loud enough. However, when he utilised it the second time there seemed tohave been a mulfuction while it was working. So the sound of it was slow that it was impossible to listen. Furthermore, when he tried listening another, the same thing happened. I would like you to replace the cassette player with well-functioningone. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunetely, I will be forced to report this to customer service Assotiation responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. yours faithfully.
Dear sir, I am writing in the hope that you can
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help
me with a problem regarding
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cassette
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player
that I recently
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bought
. On
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may
10 I visited one of your local shops in order to
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buy
a
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cassette
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player
for my husband. Looking around the shop I encountered
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exoected
items and I asked a
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sho
assistant about it.
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After
getting all information I decided to
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purchase
it. Two days later, my husband said about the problems of the item. When he
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used
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cassette
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player
for the
first
time, it worked
properly
and the voice of it was
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clear
,
also
loud
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enough
.
However
, when he
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utilised
it the second time there seemed
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tohave
been a
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mulfuction
while it was working.
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So
the sound of it was slow that it was impossible to listen.
Furthermore
, when he tried listening another, the same thing happened. I would like you to replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cassette
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
player
with
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well-functioningone
. I
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expect
to receive the same type of unit and brand.
Otherwise
,
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unfortunetely
, I will
be forced
to report this to customer service
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Assotiation
responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply.
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yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter you have recently bought a cassette player but it does not work properly. write a letter of complaint

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  American English
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192 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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