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you have recently bought a cassette player but it does not work properly.write a letter of complaint

you have recently bought a cassette player but it does not work properly. write a letter of complaint 2bdPj

Dear sir, I am writing in the hope that you can help me with a problem regarding cassette player that I recently bought. On may 10 I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a cassette player for my husband. Looking around the shop I encountered exoected items and I asked a sho assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Two days later, my husband said about the problems of the item. When he used the cassette player for the first time, it worked properly and the voice of it was clear, also loud enough. However, when he utilised it the second time there seemed tohave been a mulfuction while it was working. So the sound of it was slow that it was impossible to listen. Furthermore, when he tried listening another, the same thing happened. I would like you to replace the cassette player with well-functioningone. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunetely, I will be forced to report this to customer service Assotiation responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. yours faithfully.

Dear sir, I am writing in the hope that you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with a problem regarding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtape
cassette
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 that I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
. On The month "May" needs to be capitalized.May
may
 10 I visited one of your local shops in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtape
cassette
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 for my husband. Looking around the shop I encountered Possible spelling mistake found.expected
exoected
 items and I asked a Possible spelling mistake found.whosheshowsoshotshop
sho
 assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Two days later, my husband said about the problems of the item. When he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtape
cassette
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 for the first
 time, it worked properly
 and the voice of it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
, also
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enough
. However
, when he Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.utilized
utilised
 it the second time there seemed Possible spelling mistake found.Mohaveto have
tohave
 been a Possible spelling mistake found.malfunction
mulfuction
 while it was working. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 the sound of it was slow that it was impossible to listen. Furthermore
, when he tried listening another, the same thing happened. I would like you to replace the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtape
cassette
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompetitorathleteparticipantmemberrookieprofessional
player
 with Possible spelling mistake found.
well-functioningone
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, Possible spelling mistake found.unfortunately
unfortunetely
, I will be forced
 to report this to customer service Possible spelling mistake found.Association
Assotiation
 responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYours
yours
faithfully
. 