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a thankfull message to a volunteer who helped to support your local farm and a glimpse about farms future plan

a thankfull message to a volunteer who helped to support your local farm and a glimpse about farms future plan 2bdKJ

Dear Miss EveI feel entirely grateful about your respond. Your contribute at our local farm has been helpful during the recent events. It is essential for every community to support the local farm workers in order to be more sufficient and stable. Our local farm have an income about $20. 000 per year, and our products come from the natural habitat. We also provide diary products from our animals and fresh eggs from our chickens. One of our future goals is to organise a project for young children, we looking forward to collaborate with the local schools as we believe that nature and self-efficiency will play an major role to their lives. Children will learn from first hand the important steps of agriculture and we will represent alongside with our activities the gifts that earth can offer. We thank you for your support, Tom and it would be an honour your visit to our little paradise. Yours sincerelyMary

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