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Your friend, Pat who has just moved to Canada, has sent you a letter to ask you for some advice about choosing a friend.

Your friend, Pat who has just moved to Canada, has sent you a letter to ask you for some advice about choosing a friend. 6aPqK
Dear Pat, How are you? I hope you're very well. I deeply understand and sympathy with you how difficult to make new friends in the country that you've just moved there. So here is what I think you should do to choose a buddy. The best advice I can give you is that choose a friend who holds similar values to yours since if you have some beliefs in common, it's easy for you to share your opinion and all of your businesses with each other. Besides, it's believed that a true friend is a person who will tell you not only happy things but also unpleasant ones; but you should choose the one that makes you feel good and avoid toxic relationships. In other words, choose a positive partner that always encourages and motivates you when you're in trouble. Last but not least, give and take makes good friends. No matters how your friend is, a boy or a girl, white or colored, and the like, you first have to respect them and be a great friend. Hope this advice will help you. Don't forget to write me back to tell me what's going on. Best wishes, Julie
Dear Pat,

How are you? I hope you're
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well. I
deeply
understand and sympathy with you how difficult to
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make
new
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friends
in the country that you've
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just
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moved
there.
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So
here is what I
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think
you should do to
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choose
a buddy. The best advice I can give you is that
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choose
a
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friend
who holds similar values to yours since if you have
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some
beliefs in common, it's easy for you to share your opinion and all of your businesses with each other.
Besides
, it's believed that a true
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friend
is a person who will
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tell
you not
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only
happy things
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but
also
unpleasant ones;
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but
you should
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choose
the one that
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makes
you feel
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good
and avoid toxic relationships.
In other words
,
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choose
a
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positive
partner that always encourages and motivates you when you're in trouble. Last
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but
not least, give and take
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makes
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good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
. No matters how your
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friend
is, a boy or a girl, white or colored, and the like, you
first
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have to
respect them and be a great friend.

Hope this advice will
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help
you. Don't forget to write me back to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me what's going on.

Best wishes,

Julie
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IELTS letter Your friend, Pat who has just moved to Canada, has sent you a letter to ask you for some advice about choosing a friend.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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