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write a letter to lawyer about you condition and ask her to help you about your case.

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Hello Ms. Melo, One of your clients "Julio Barbosa" has recommended you to me for the OINP program. He sent a message to you about me two days ago. I have a similar condition to Julio, and I wonder if you could help me to get my OIPN and PR. My wife is a student at George brown college, and I have an open work permit. Right now, I am working as an IT system administrator. H hope you can help us regarding this matter. I am looking forward to receiving your answer. Best Regards, Navid Chalabi
Hello Ms.
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One of your clients
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Julio Barbosa
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has recommended you to me for the
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program. He
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a message to you about me two days ago.

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me to
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and PR. My wife is a student at George brown college, and I have an open work permit. Right
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, I am working as an IT system administrator.

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Best Regards,

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IELTS letter write a letter to lawyer about you condition and ask her to help you about your case.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
96 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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