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To thank to Mr Akmal for helping me to find my lost passport.

To thank to Mr Akmal for helping me to find my lost passport. 1AKMG
Dear Sir, I'm writting this letter to extend my sincere thanks to mr. Akmal the secretary of your school. I am pupil and every day I go to lesson. Last Saturday morning lost the passport. I am look for very the passport. I bought new the passport. My friends look for it. I am a decline. My family and I were very much grateful to mr. Akmal for his vigilant. Please, forward heartfelt thanksfulnes to him. We feel very much proud of your school for having such a good employee. If mr. Akmal was late for work that day, I'd like to compensate you. I do hope that your the school would reward mr. Akmal for his noble deeds. If your need anything in your work, please let me know. I lack words with which to express my gratitude to you. I am much obligated to you for your timely help. Your faitffully mrs smith.
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. Akmal the secretary of your school. I am pupil and every day I go to lesson. Last Saturday morning lost the passport. I am look for
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the passport. I
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much grateful to
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. Akmal for his vigilant.
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. Akmal was late for work that day, I'd like to compensate you. I do hope that your the school would reward
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. Akmal for his noble deeds. If your need anything in your work,
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IELTS letter To thank to Mr Akmal for helping me to find my lost passport.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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