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To thank to Sir for helping to find my passport.

To thank to Sir for helping to find my passport. Lb20p
Dear Sir This letter is to express my thanks and appreciation for. Thank you for returning my passport. My husband and I want to thank you for and very thank you. I take a taxi to work every day. It has become a habit for me. One day I dropped my passport in a taxi because I was in a hurry to work. That day I really needed a passport. I looked for it in my bag. That evening a man came to our house and this is the address of Nargiza Anarboyeva? I replied, "yes, I will be Anarboyeva Nargiza"He told me that she had brought my passport back and returned it to me. That is why I am grateful to her. I am writing these fewlines to express my sincere thanks, not only to yourself but to taxi driver as well. I ask you to reward him with a prize. With respect Anarboyeva Nargiza.
Dear Sir

This letter is to express my
thanks
and appreciation for.
Thank
you for returning my
passport
. My husband and I want to
thank
you for and
very
thank
you. I take a taxi to work every day. It has become a habit for me. One day I dropped my
passport
in a taxi
because
I was in a hurry to work. That day I
really
needed a
passport
. I looked for it in my bag. That evening a
man
came to our
house
and this is the address of
Nargiza
Anarboyeva
? I replied,
"
yes, I will be
Anarboyeva
Nargiza
"
He
told
me that she had brought my
passport
back and returned it to me.
That is
why I am grateful to her. I am writing
these


fewlines
to express my sincere
thanks
, not
only
to yourself
but
to taxi driver
as well
. I ask you to reward him with a prize.

With respect

Anarboyeva
Nargiza
.
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IELTS letter To thank to Sir for helping to find my passport.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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