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your friend let you spend the weekend at his seaside cottage. While staying there you accidentally stained an expensive Persian rug. Write a letter apologising for the damage and offering to get it cleaned.

your friend let you spend the weekend at his seaside cottage. While staying there you accidentally stained an expensive Persian rug. Write a letter apologising for the damage and offering to get it cleaned. aEaJV
Dear Johnson I can't describe how sorry I am and ho quilty I feel. First, I will say thanks a lot for your inviting that you later me staying your seaside cottage. When I was there with my family, my son accidentally stained an expensive Persian rug. What can I say, I didn't want on the contrary my son is immensely noisy. Anyway, I will try to take care it will be like this. What happened I mustn't permit to my son for painting the picture. For this reason I would like to offer you, I will not purchase another one rug however I will clean it next day. I hope you believe me when I say how sorry I am. Love Joanna.
Dear Johnson

I can't
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describe
how sorry I am and ho
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quilty
I feel.

First
, I will say thanks a lot for your inviting that you later me staying your seaside cottage. When I was there with my family, my son
accidentally
stained an expensive Persian rug. What can I say, I didn't want
on the contrary
my son is
immensely
noisy. Anyway, I will try to take care it will be like this. What happened I mustn't permit to my son for painting the picture.

For this reason
I would like to offer you, I will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
another one rug
however
I will clean it
next
day.

I hope you believe me when I say how sorry I am.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love


Joanna.

IELTS letter your friend let you spend the weekend at his seaside cottage. While staying there you accidentally stained an expensive Persian rug. Write a letter apologising for the damage and offering to get it cleaned.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
123 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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