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Write a letter to tutor that your children are want to learn foreign language. Tell him why are you writing to him, why students need tuition and his work experience

Write a letter to tutor that your children are want to learn foreign language. Tell him why are you writing to him, why students need tuition and his work experience 7rbA5

Dear Sir, I have got to know about your French language tuition service from my mate Andrews, who enrolled his kids for the same class last summers. My kids, 7 years old son and 8 years old daughter, are extremely keen to learn French, as their one of the favorite cartoon shows is in this language. Moreover, we are planning to immigrate to Canada, where French is the second language, so this skill would anyways be good to have. They have already enrolled for French in the optional language course, recently being added to their curriculum. Although they are picking things quite well, but still I consider a need for the professional tutor who can leverage modern teaching methodologies like placards, visuals and gamification to name a few. Andrews conveyed me that you are the pioneer in using these techniques especially in small town like Amritsar. They can speak and listen pretty well, but sometimes face issues while reading or writing French content. Although there is a lot of positive word of mouth, still it would be great if you could share your past work experience in the relevant domain along with the fee structure. Also, please suggest if there are any pre-requisites to join your classes, so that students can equip themselves accordingly. I have just one small request, please keep us posted via weekly report about their progress. I am sure you would try your best in honing their skills. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Inderjeet Singh

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Yours sincerely
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Inderjeet
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