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Letter to a transport company about a method of transport -when and why you use this method of transport -criticisms of the transport service -how this has affected you/your work

Letter to a transport company about a method of transport -when and why you use this method of transport -criticisms of the transport service -how this has affected you/your work oVKrV

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the bus that I had used last Sunday morning. Let me explain in detail, since I moved to Dubai I have been using the bus to commute to work on a daily basis for the last three years. Apart from the work, I am also using the buses in intercity or when I have to go to the supermarkets. There are some cons points which I would like to mention here. Firstly, the buses never reached on time it always late about quarter-hour. Although fifteen minutes is not a big issue, however, we have to wait under the sun and the weather in Dubai is quite hot and unbearable. Further, sometimes the Bus Air conditioner is not working which I personally experience. The following facts that I mention in the above paragraph not only affected my office timing but also It causes my office uniform to become smelly because of sweating. I hope you will take some action after considering all the factors explain. Yours Sincerely

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the bus that I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 last Sunday morning.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 in detail, since I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to Dubai I have been using the bus to commute to work on a daily basis for the last three years. Apart from the work, I am also
 using the buses in intercity or when I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go to the supermarkets.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cons points which I would like to mention here. Firstly
, the buses never reached on time it always late about quarter-hour. Although fifteen minutes is not a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 issue, however
, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 wait under the sun and the weather in Dubai is quite hot and unbearable. Further
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 the Bus Air conditioner is not working which I personally
 experience.

The following facts that I mention in the above paragraph not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 my office timing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 It causes my office uniform to become smelly This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of sweating.

I hope you will take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 action after considering all the factors This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
.

Yours Sincerely

IELTS letter Letter to a transport company about a method of transport -when and why you use this method of transport -criticisms of the transport service -how this has affected you/your work

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

173 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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