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You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you are happy.

You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you are happy. bEaKl
I am writing this letter in order to express my delight with the excellent service and high quality of food that your restaurant provided us last Satuday night on the occasion of my 26th birthday. We were a party of ten, which included my beloved friends and colleagues from work. Your staff went out of their way to provide seating arrangement that were easily accessible and did not interfere with other diners. I find this is unusual in many restaurants these day. The waiters extremely professional and very polite and were obviously experienced as they did not encroach too much on the procedings. Your current menu offers a great deal of choice with reasonable price and of course your wine list and everything was available. There are no complaints about the quality or quantity of the dished serves and the presentation of each dish was amazing. I order a dinner plater, which was deliciously and if anything maybe slightly to large. Nevertheless, I manage to share with my friends and finish it. All in all, our group enjoyed a wonderful night at your establishment and I had a very happy birthday and good memory. Your sincerely
I am writing this letter in order to express my delight with the excellent service and high quality of food that your restaurant provided us last
Satuday
night on the occasion of my 26th birthday.

We were a party of ten, which included my beloved friends and colleagues from work. Your staff went out of their way to provide seating arrangement that were
easily
accessible and did not interfere with other diners. I find this is unusual in
many
restaurants
these day
. The waiters
extremely
professional and
very
polite and were
obviously
experienced as they did not encroach too much on the
procedings
.

Your
current
menu offers a great deal of choice with reasonable price and
of course
your wine list and everything was available. There are no complaints about the quality or quantity of the dished serves and the presentation of each dish was amazing. I order a dinner
plater
, which was
deliciously
and if anything maybe
slightly
to large.
Nevertheless
, I manage to share with my friends and finish it.

All in all, our group enjoyed a wonderful night at your establishment and I had a
very
happy birthday and
good
memory.

Your
sincerely
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IELTS letter You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you are happy.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
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