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You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord.

You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. xgNeQ

Dear Sir, We were looking forward an apartment to rent. On August 1, 2020 we have just found it, which we liked. In the beginning everything was fine. The flat was cozy and clean. After we looked through it, we rented for the home unit. On August 5, 2020 we moved to new house. As soon as, we entered the flat we were shocked to see the condition of the house. The door of the bedroom wouldn't close and when I came to the kitchen, there was not water on the top. It felt me very puzzled. You didn't tell us about it. I suggested that you would solve these problems. I don't have bad opinions around you and your company. I request that you refund the money in full or, to fix all things. I hope you'll look into the matter and gave me an immediate reply Yours faithfully, Lorry Smith.

Dear Sir, We were looking forward an apartment to rent. On August 1, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2020,".2020,
2020
 we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 found it, which we liked. In the beginning everything was fine. The flat was cozy and clean. After we looked through it, we rented for the home unit. On August 5, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2020,".2020,
2020
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as, we entered the flat we were shocked
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the condition of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. The door of the bedroom wouldn't close and when I came to the kitchen, there was not water on the top. It felt me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 puzzled. You didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 us about it. I suggested that you would solve these problems. I don't have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 opinions around you and your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 request that you refund the money in full or, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 all things. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you'll look into the matter and gave me an immediate reply Yours faithfully
, Lorry Smith. 