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Write a letter to your employer about you need to find a new supervisor for your department.

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Dear Mr Smith It is five years since i participated in this industry. During that time, i have contributed very much about developments of industry. I write this letter in order to lend to my occupant with wish that company can see qualification of mine and I would like to have new position is a supervison. During five years, i've found a number of customer lead to our brand. Besides, i speculated out several new inventions to possible to support our improvement. Saying to my skills, i believe that: if i am had opportunity to share in construction of department, i will fulfill excellently projects because i am a responsible person in work. Furthermore, i always culture many skills of society and i am also familiar English. Not only that, i have adventage in meaning of communication with clients, so this will bring benefits for industry. I comprehend that: Being difficult to confirm my request. On ther other hand, i wish own company could have a long-sighted vision about ability of mine, and i soon will be to be promoted!
Dear Mr Smith It is five years since
i
participated in this industry. During that time,
i
have contributed
very
much about developments of industry. I write this letter in order to lend to my occupant with wish that
company
can
see
qualification of mine and I would like to have new position is a
supervison
. During five years,
i've
found a number of customer lead to our brand.
Besides
,
i
speculated out several new inventions to possible to support our improvement. Saying to my
skills
,
i
believe that: if
i
am had
opportunity to share in construction of department,
i
will fulfill
excellently
projects
because
i
am a responsible person in work.
Furthermore
,
i
always culture
many
skills
of society and
i
am
also
familiar English. Not
only
that,
i
have
adventage
in meaning of communication with clients,
so
this will bring benefits for industry. I comprehend that: Being difficult to confirm my request. On
ther
other hand,
i
wish
own
company
could have a long-sighted vision about ability of mine, and
i
soon
will be to
be promoted
!
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your employer about you need to find a new supervisor for your department.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
180 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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