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You have heard that your company is organising a language training abroad for a limited number of participants write a letter of intercts.

You have heard that your company is organising a language training abroad for a limited number of participants write a letter of intercts. Vraxm
Dear Madam. Learning from Mr John Smith that you are looking for a sale manager, I should like to apply for position. My name is John Powell. I am a graduate of Oxford University, and have recently completed the business course at Harvard University. I have a year of experience in the BBC company in America, and so I know English but I want to learn a foreign language again. Our company has a lot of influential staff. Language proficiency has a huge impact on our work so we want our employees to go abroad and learn the language. My appeal is to increase the salaries of our employees and create conditions for them to go abroad. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you an EID. John Powell.
Dear Madam. Learning from Mr John Smith that you are looking for a sale manager, I should like to apply for position. My name is John Powell. I am a graduate of Oxford University, and have recently completed the business course at Harvard University. I have a year of experience in the BBC
company
in America, and
so
I know English
but
I want to learn a foreign language again. Our
company
has
a lot of
influential staff. Language proficiency has a huge impact on our work
so
we want our employees to go abroad and learn the language. My appeal is to increase the salaries of our employees and create conditions for them to go abroad. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you an EID. John Powell.
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IELTS letter You have heard that your company is organising a language training abroad for a limited number of participants write a letter of intercts.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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