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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task " your friend Jane has written you a letter. Part of it says" what's your favorite day of the week? I'd love to hear all about it" Write an email respond to your friend. You should write at least 120 words.

" your friend Jane has written you a letter. Part of it says" what's your favorite day of the week? I'd love to hear all about it" Write an email respond to your friend. PXXxw

Dear Jane, Thank for your letter and it was great to hear from you. I recieved your letter 2 days ago when i was having a deadline of my job so I could not have time to reply your email right away. You ask me to tell you my favorite day of the week. Well, it definately is Sunday. Sunday is my favorite day because it's my dayoff. You know, my working time is from monday to Saturday, so in a week, I have only one dayoff. Unlike the other days of the week when I wake up early to go to work, on Sunday morning, I always have an oversleep with my kids. We often wake up at 9: 30AM and have breakfast outside. We enjoy the dayoff by drinking some coffe and juice after breakfast. It's also time for me to relax and read books, while my husband plays games with my kids. We also often cook lunch and clean up house together. It must be the best time in day for me cause I love cooking. I and my daughter are preparing our favorite food while my husband and my son are cleaning up house. We finish the day by watching a film together. We rarely go outside to have a picnic, cause I just want to spend time for my family and relax to ready for a new week. It's really a great day for. What about you? I would love to hear your sharing about your favorite day. I am looking forward to see you soon on another Sunday.

Dear Jane,

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 and juice after breakfast. It's also
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 for me to relax and read books, while my husband plays games with my kids. We also
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often
 cook lunch and clean up This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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must
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love
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favorite
 food while my husband and my son are cleaning up This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
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. We finish the day by watching a film together. We rarely go outside to have a picnic, Did you mean "because I"?because I
cause I
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just
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 for my family and relax to ready for a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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. It's really
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What about you? I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
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 to hear your sharing about your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfavoredbelovedpopularmainprizedtreasured
favorite
 day. I am looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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soon
 on another Sunday. 