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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task " your friend Jane has written you a letter. Part of it says" what's your favorite day of the week? I'd love to hear all about it" Write an email respond to your friend. You should write at least 120 words.

" your friend Jane has written you a letter. Part of it says" what's your favorite day of the week? I'd love to hear all about it" Write an email respond to your friend. PXXxw
Dear Jane, Thank for your letter and it was great to hear from you. I recieved your letter 2 days ago when i was having a deadline of my job so I could not have time to reply your email right away. You ask me to tell you my favorite day of the week. Well, it definately is Sunday. Sunday is my favorite day because it's my dayoff. You know, my working time is from monday to Saturday, so in a week, I have only one dayoff. Unlike the other days of the week when I wake up early to go to work, on Sunday morning, I always have an oversleep with my kids. We often wake up at 9: 30AM and have breakfast outside. We enjoy the dayoff by drinking some coffe and juice after breakfast. It's also time for me to relax and read books, while my husband plays games with my kids. We also often cook lunch and clean up house together. It must be the best time in day for me cause I love cooking. I and my daughter are preparing our favorite food while my husband and my son are cleaning up house. We finish the day by watching a film together. We rarely go outside to have a picnic, cause I just want to spend time for my family and relax to ready for a new week. It's really a great day for. What about you? I would love to hear your sharing about your favorite day. I am looking forward to see you soon on another Sunday.
Dear Jane,

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recieved
your letter 2 days ago when
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i
was having a deadline of my job
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I could not have
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time
to reply your email right away. You ask me to
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tell
you my
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favorite
day of the
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week
. Well, it
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definately
is Sunday.

Sunday is my
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favorite
day
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because
it's my
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dayoff
. You know, my working
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time
is from
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monday
to Saturday,
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so
in a
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week
, I have
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only
one
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dayoff
. Unlike the other days of the
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week
when I wake up early to go to work, on Sunday morning, I always have
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an oversleep
with my kids. We
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often
wake up at 9: 30AM and have breakfast outside. We enjoy the
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dayoff
by drinking
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some
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coffe
and juice after breakfast. It's
also
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time
for me to relax and read books, while my husband plays games with my kids. We
also
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often
cook lunch and clean up
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house
together. It
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must
be the best
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time
in day for me
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cause I
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love
cooking. I and my daughter are preparing our
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favorite
food while my husband and my son are cleaning up
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house
. We finish the day by watching a film together. We rarely go outside to have a picnic,
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cause I
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just
want to spend
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time
for my family and relax to ready for a new
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week
. It's
really
a great day for.

What about you? I would
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love
to hear your sharing about your
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favorite
day. I am looking forward to
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see
you
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soon
on another Sunday.

IELTS letter " your friend Jane has written you a letter. Part of it says" what's your favorite day of the week? I'd love to hear all about it" Write an email respond to your friend.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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