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Arrange to visit my friend in england but an important family event at home now means that you must cahnge the date to visit

Arrange to visit my friend in england but an important family event at home now means that you must cahnge the date to visit ygbaJ
Dear friend, Hope you are doing well. I am doing great. I was too much excited to visit u my friend but here come an urgency for an important family event. The sad part is the event date collapse with my flight date which I have already booked for England. I know we have planned for this meet up for so long on the other hand the event is important for me as well cause this is my closest cousins wedding ceremony. Now I am on a dilemma what to do. I am feeling really upset I want to visit you so badly but I think this time I can not make it happen. Really apologise for this incident but I promise you to meet you as early as possible after finishing my cousins wedding. Hope to see you soon. Don’t be sad my dear. Make a list what do you want from Bangladesh And you also make plan where we will visit whenever I will come to England. wait for me. Yours truely Hema
Dear friend,

Hope you are doing well.

I am doing great. I was too much excited to visit u my friend
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here
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an urgency for an
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family
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. The sad part is the
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date collapse with my flight date which I have already booked for England.

I know we have planned for this
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up for
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long
on the other hand
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for me
as well
cause this is my closest cousins wedding ceremony.
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I am on a dilemma what to do. I am feeling
really
upset I want to visit you
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badly
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I
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this time I can not
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it happen.
Really
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apologise
for this incident
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I promise you to
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you as early as possible after finishing my cousins wedding. Hope to
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see
you
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. Don’t be sad my dear.
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Make
a list what do you want from Bangladesh And you
also
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plan where we will visit whenever I will
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to England.

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wait
for me.

Yours
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truely


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Hema

IELTS letter Arrange to visit my friend in england but an important family event at home now means that you must cahnge the date to visit

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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