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Arrange to visit my friend in england but an important family event at home now means that you must cahnge the date to visit

Arrange to visit my friend in england but an important family event at home now means that you must cahnge the date to visit ygbaJ

Dear friend, Hope you are doing well. I am doing great. I was too much excited to visit u my friend but here come an urgency for an important family event. The sad part is the event date collapse with my flight date which I have already booked for England. I know we have planned for this meet up for so long on the other hand the event is important for me as well cause this is my closest cousins wedding ceremony. Now I am on a dilemma what to do. I am feeling really upset I want to visit you so badly but I think this time I can not make it happen. Really apologise for this incident but I promise you to meet you as early as possible after finishing my cousins wedding. Hope to see you soon. Don’t be sad my dear. Make a list what do you want from Bangladesh And you also make plan where we will visit whenever I will come to England. wait for me. Yours truely Hema

Dear friend,

Hope you are doing well.

I am doing great. I was too much excited to visit u my friend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 here This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 an urgency for an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. The sad part is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 date collapse with my flight date which I have already booked for England.

I know we have planned for this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 up for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long on the other hand
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for me as well
 cause this is my closest cousins wedding ceremony. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I am on a dilemma what to do. I am feeling really
 upset I want to visit you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
badly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this time I can not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it happen. Really
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 for this incident This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I promise you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you as early as possible after finishing my cousins wedding. Hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Don’t be sad my dear. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
Make
 a list what do you want from Bangladesh And you also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 plan where we will visit whenever I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to England.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWait
wait
 for me.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.truly
truely


Possible spelling mistake found.HempHeraHemHEPAHemsHeme
Hema