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Your friend- Jack, who is coming to visit your country with his friends. Writing an email to Jack, answering his questions : what

Your friend- Jack, who is coming to visit your country with his friends. Writing an email to Jack, answering his questions: what qa5VE
Hi Jack. How are you? I hope you’re very well. Please accept my apologies for not replying to you sooner than I promised. I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to my hometown with your friends. You guys will be very welcome here. When it comes to my country, Hoi An ancient town is the first thing that/which comes into people’s mind. Hoi an is a big- name site for many tourists in recently years thanks to its ancient architectural features. I believe that you’ll need to spend a full day going sightseeing around there. Besides, trying local foods along the streets is not also a bad recommendation for you. In terms of transportation, If I were you, I would hike bikes instead of traveling by bus, train and so on because the public transportation seems not to be popular in my hometown. In addition, there are many attractive exhibitions and pagodas. It isn’t very difficult for you to bump into young people who are ready to become a tour guide together with you to learn about unique cultures in Hoi An and Vietnam as well. I have my summer vacation in July so I may be available to take a trip with you. I am sure you’ll be really keen on my beautiful country. Feel free to email or phone me if you need my help. See you soon! Love August.
Hi Jack.

How are you? I hope you’re
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very
well.
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Please
accept my

apologies for not replying to you sooner than I promised. I’m

glad to hear that you’re coming to my hometown with your

friends. You guys will be
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very
welcome here.

When it
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comes
to my country,
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Hoi
An ancient town is the
first


thing that/which
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comes
into
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people
’s mind.
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Hoi
an is a
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big
-

name site for
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many
tourists in recently years thanks to its

ancient architectural features. I believe that you’ll need to

spend a full day going sightseeing around there.
Besides
, trying

local foods along the streets is not
also
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
recommendation

for you. In terms of transportation, If I were you, I would hike

bikes
instead
of traveling by bus, train and
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so
on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the

public transportation seems not to be popular in my hometown.

In addition
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
attractive exhibitions and

pagodas. It isn’t
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult for you to bump into young

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who are ready to become a tour guide together with you

to learn about unique cultures in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hoi
An and Vietnam
as well
.

I have my summer vacation in July
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I may be available to

take a trip with you. I am sure you’ll be
really
keen on my

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
country.

Feel free to email or phone me if you need my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
!

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love


August.
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IELTS letter Your friend- Jack, who is coming to visit your country with his friends. Writing an email to Jack, answering his questions: what

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
232 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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