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You live in an apartment for rent. Your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your house owner

You live in an apartment for rent. Your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your house owner obVXD
Dear Mr. Smith, Greetings for the day. I hope you and your family are all well. I am writing this letter to bring it to your attention the problem of unbearable levels of noise from your new tenant Mr. Sam who lives next door. Unfortunately, his lifestyle involving house parties on a regular basis has been an issue of utmost inconvenience for my entire family. The issue is Mr. Sam belongs to a band of musicians who gather almost every night to compose and rehearse songs. Although I can understand that it is his profession, and he needs to practice regularly, these sessions turn to ear-splitting parties late into the night. As you are aware, we are a joint family with small kids and my aged parents. This has become a stressful issue to deal with on a day-to-day basis. My kids wake up often in the middle of the night disturbed by the blasting noise they create. My old parents are both hypertensive and a good night’s sleep is critical for their health. With Mr. Sam and his band playing jarring music at all hours, I have been unable to maintain peace within my home. These days even I am going to work tired and droopy eyed due to sleep deprivation. It would be immense help if you could speak to Mr. Sam regarding this matter and ask him to turn down the volume or find a studio to perform his practice sessions. I have spoken to him about it and there has been no response from his end. I look forward to seeing this problem solved in the near future. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Sharadha Devi Sankaran
Dear Mr. Smith,

Greetings for the day.

I hope you and your family are all well. I am writing this letter to bring it to your attention the problem of unbearable levels of noise from your new tenant Mr. Sam who
lives
next
door. Unfortunately, his lifestyle involving
house
parties on a regular basis has been an issue of utmost inconvenience for my entire family.

The issue is Mr. Sam belongs to a band of musicians who gather almost every night to compose and rehearse songs. Although I can understand that it is his profession, and he needs to practice
regularly
, these sessions turn to ear-splitting parties late into the night.

As you are aware, we are a joint family with
small
kids and my aged parents. This has become a stressful issue to deal with on a day-to-day basis. My kids wake up
often
in the middle of the night disturbed by the blasting noise they create. My
old
parents are both hypertensive and a
good
night’s sleep is critical for their health. With Mr. Sam and his band playing jarring music at all hours, I have been unable to maintain peace within my home. These days even I am going to work tired and droopy eyed due to sleep deprivation.

It would be immense
help
if you could speak to Mr. Sam regarding this matter and ask him to turn down the volume or find a studio to perform his practice sessions. I have spoken to him about it and there has been no response from his
end
.

I look forward to seeing this problem solved in the near future. Thank you in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

Sharadha
Devi
Sankaran
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IELTS letter You live in an apartment for rent. Your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your house owner

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  American English
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280 words
6.0
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