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Write a letter to a business man for job

Write a letter to a business man for job NwVaq

Dear Mike, My name is Hossein, we have met each other last week on flight from Vancouver to Toronto. As you may recall, we were seated next to each other and chatted all the way from departure to destination. In the middle of chat, you favored me and said that you may have a job for me in your restaurants. You suggested me to contact you on this matter. As I have studied accounting in the university, I think I will make a good accountant for on of your branches. Maybe I can take the position of financial advisor if you become satisfied with my performance enough. I topped my undergraduate course, done some apprenticeship in huge companies and worked in this field for five years. I have just been accepted for master degree in financial management and took MBA course last year. I am pretty good at math and willing to be a key member of a huge team. Therefore, I think I will make a valuable part of your business. I really thank you for giving me this opportunity to apply for a job and looking forward to start working for you. With best regards. Hossein

Dear Mike,

My name is Hossein, we have met each other last week on flight from Vancouver to Toronto. As you may recall, we were seated
next
 to each other and chatted all the way from departure to destination.

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think
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make
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good
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enough
.

I topped my undergraduate course, done This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 apprenticeship in huge This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 and worked in this field for five years. I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 for master degree in financial management and took MBA course last year. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am pretty This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at math and willing to be a key member of a huge team. Therefore
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a valuable part of your business.

I really
 thank you for giving me this opportunity to apply for a job and looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 working for you.

With best regards.

Hossein