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asking council not to close leisure center

asking council not to close leisure center DYNYE

Dear sir or Madam, I am writing to express my sad feeling about the news spreading through the neighborhood, as the sport and leisure center is going to be closed soon. Both physical and mental health are important aspects of social living, and local council is responsible of them. Sport and leisure center is one of the major venues in developing physical and mental health. As an example of the whole community, I can mention my family. All my family members use Sport and leisure center for different purposes. My parents use there to create or join teams for morning sports. My brother uses there for individual activities like body building. Even my little sister has been registered for painting classes. Considering mentioned points, shutting down Sport and leisure center can make some significant troubles. Young people in the neighborhood, need to spent some time to navigate other areas to attend gyms, which also increase local traffic. But about older people, it may not be that possible, so it leads them to stay most of their time at home. I would appreciate it if you investigate more on the decision, and consider all the consequences. Yours faithfully Amir Khamesipour

Dear sir or Madam,

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.

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leisure
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to spent
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some
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so
 it leads them to stay most of their time at home.

I would appreciate it if you investigate more on the decision, and consider all the consequences.

Yours faithfully


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