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write a cover letter to apply for the post of flight attendant

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Dear Mrs Claire Downing I am writing in response to the post advertised on your website for the position of a flight attendant Although I am a fresh graduate, I have already got some experience in jobs related to customer services. In particular, I would like to point out the customer services skills I gained through my work placement in a spa center. In addition, I used to be a local guide assistant for a non-profit organization and a travel agency when studying at university. Therefore, I think that my communication and organizational skill are good. My mother tongue is Vietnamese, but I have been studying English at an early age. I am confident that I can carry out all my duties in English, and I can speak a bit of Korean. I am extroverted, energetic, and considerate. I enjoy being with people as well as working as part of a team. I feel I would bring my commitment and enthusiasm to the advertised role. In the meantime, I enclosed copies of my CV, and I am available for an interview at any time convenient for you. Thank you for your time and consideration. I very much look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Ann
Dear Mrs Claire Downing

I am writing in response to the post advertised on your website for the position of a flight attendant

Although I am a fresh graduate, I have already
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skills
I gained through my work placement in a spa center.
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to be a local guide assistant for a non-profit organization and a travel agency when studying at university.
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think
that my communication and organizational
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My mother tongue is Vietnamese,
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I have been studying English at an early age. I am confident that I can carry out all my duties in English, and I can speak a bit of Korean.

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am extroverted
, energetic, and considerate.
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enjoy being with
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as well
as working as part of a team.
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I
feel I would bring my commitment and enthusiasm to the advertised role.

In the meantime, I enclosed copies of my CV, and I am available for an interview at any time convenient for you.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I
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much look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
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Ann
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IELTS letter write a cover letter to apply for the post of flight attendant

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
205 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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