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your friend is visiting your country first time. Please let him know that you would be late in receiving him. Ask him to stay there and how he can recognise you.

your friend is visiting your country first time. Please let him know that you would be late in receiving him. Ask him to stay there and how he can recognise you. 86dYG
Dear Vivek, It's great to know that you are visiting India. I am extremely excited to meet you in person. As per your ticket details, your plane will arrive at 6pm on 4th October. I would be there to receive you but I will reach the airport an hour late. As you know 4th October is a Monday and we have our weekly meeting on every Monday. It is mandatory for employee to attend this meeting. Since it would be first time you are coming to India, I want you to stay at the airport. There are many coffee shops at the airport where you can wait. One of the most famous coffee shops is Coffee Day, it is close to the exit door number 2 and very easy to reach. I know we have been interacting for almost six months but never seen each other or even exchanged our photographs. Please do not worry, you can identify me easily. As you know, I would be coming from office so I would be wearing formal white shirt and black trousers. My identity card would around my neck with my company name, my photo and my name on it. I look forward to meeting you and having fun together. Yours lovingly, Anup
Dear Vivek,

It's great to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
that you are visiting India. I am
extremely
excited to
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meet
you in person.

As per your ticket
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details
, your
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plane
will arrive at 6pm on 4th October. I would be there to receive you
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but
I will reach the airport an hour late. As you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
4th October is a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Monday and
we have our weekly meeting on every Monday. It is mandatory for employee to attend this meeting.

Since it would be
first
time you are coming to India, I want you to stay at the airport. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
coffee shops at the airport where you can wait. One of the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
coffee shops is Coffee Day, it is close to the exit door number 2 and
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very
easy to reach.

I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
we have been interacting for almost six months
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but
never
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seen
each other or even exchanged our photographs.
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Please
do not worry, you can identify me
easily
. As you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
, I would be coming from office
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I would be wearing formal white shirt and black trousers. My identity card would around my neck with my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
name, my photo and my name on it.

I look forward to meeting you and having fun together.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Anup
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IELTS letter your friend is visiting your country first time. Please let him know that you would be late in receiving him. Ask him to stay there and how he can recognise you.

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