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Write a letter to your colleague and ask to buy a gift for the manager who is leaving your company. In your letter Explain your feelings about it. Suggest a present. Make arrangements to buy it.

Write a letter to your colleague and ask to buy a gift for the manager who is leaving your company. In your letter Explain your feelings about it. Suggest a present. Make arrangements to buy it. n1xno
Dear Maclain, Good day! How are you? It's been a while since we've met, we're working in one building but rarely meet since we have a lot in our plate because of the sudden resignation of our manager. It really gives me a heartache because she's been so kind to us. Our head manager is a nature lover, she loves to do some extreme activity such as treking, hiking and snorkling. Maybe we give her some remembrance that she can use when she's hiking. Thats why i will give you some trouble, can you buy our present for her when you passed by in the gift shop beside your unit. Since it is on your way and i'm still here in the office dealing with the work loads that our head urgently ask me to finish, i don't have spare time left to run to the gift shop. Lets just split the bill after. Or you can take it whole if you want. Just kidding! Thankyou so much. Warm regards, Micaella
Dear
Maclain
,

Good
day! How are you? It's been a while since we've met, we're working in one building
but
rarely
meet
since we have a lot in our plate
because
of the sudden resignation of our manager. It
really
gives me a heartache
because
she's been
so
kind to us.

Our head manager is a nature lover, she
loves
to do
some
extreme activity such as
treking
, hiking and
snorkling
. Maybe we give her
some
remembrance that she can
use
when she's hiking.

Thats
why
i
will give you
some
trouble, can you
buy
our present for her when you passed by in the gift shop beside your unit. Since it is on your way and
i'm
still
here in the office dealing with the work loads that our head
urgently
ask me to finish,
i
don't have spare time
left
to run to the gift shop.
Lets
just
split the bill after. Or you can take it whole if you want.
Just
kidding!

Thankyou
so
much.

Warm regards,

Micaella
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your colleague and ask to buy a gift for the manager who is leaving your company. In your letter Explain your feelings about it. Suggest a present. Make arrangements to buy it.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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