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Write a letter to your colleague and ask to buy a gift for the manager who is leaving your company. In your letter Explain your feelings about it. Suggest a present. Make arrangements to buy it.

Write a letter to your colleague and ask to buy a gift for the manager who is leaving your company. In your letter Explain your feelings about it. Suggest a present. Make arrangements to buy it. n1xno
Dear Maclain, Good day! How are you? It's been a while since we've met, we're working in one building but rarely meet since we have a lot in our plate because of the sudden resignation of our manager. It really gives me a heartache because she's been so kind to us. Our head manager is a nature lover, she loves to do some extreme activity such as treking, hiking and snorkling. Maybe we give her some remembrance that she can use when she's hiking. Thats why i will give you some trouble, can you buy our present for her when you passed by in the gift shop beside your unit. Since it is on your way and i'm still here in the office dealing with the work loads that our head urgently ask me to finish, i don't have spare time left to run to the gift shop. Lets just split the bill after. Or you can take it whole if you want. Just kidding! Thankyou so much. Warm regards, Micaella
Dear
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Maclain
,

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day! How are you? It's been a while since we've met, we're working in one building
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but
rarely
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meet
since we have a lot in our plate
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of the sudden resignation of our manager. It
really
gives me a heartache
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because
she's been
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so
kind to us.

Our head manager is a nature lover, she
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loves
to do
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some
extreme activity such as
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treking
, hiking and
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snorkling
. Maybe we give her
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some
remembrance that she can
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use
when she's hiking.

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Thats
why
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i
will give you
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some
trouble, can you
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buy
our present for her when you passed by in the gift shop beside your unit. Since it is on your way and
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i'm
still
here in the office dealing with the work loads that our head
urgently
ask me to finish,
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i
don't have spare time
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left
to run to the gift shop.
Did you mean "Let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?
Lets
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just
split the bill after. Or you can take it whole if you want.
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Just
kidding!

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Thankyou
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so
much.

Warm regards,

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Micaella
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your colleague and ask to buy a gift for the manager who is leaving your company. In your letter Explain your feelings about it. Suggest a present. Make arrangements to buy it.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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