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You bought TV set at store but did not work.

You bought TV set at store but did not work. w7O5e

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complaint about TV set. I bought it your online store 3 days ago. Your employees delivered it to us. They set us up and used it, then we went to the mountain, had stayed for 2 days. We have returned today and when we watched TV but it did not switch on and did not connect it, we did not know what was happening it? It did not work. I called your staffs many times but they were not responsible their work. Such poor quality products should not be tolerated in a store, which changes such high prices. Moreover, your staffs were not responsible and polite their customers. I assume you will replace the TV set as it is obviously faulty I demand a full refund of my money again to this store. However, as a manager you would be wise to guard against such appalling treatment of you customers in future. Your faithfully, Mukarramova Mushtariy.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complaint about TV set. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it your online store 3 days ago. Your employees delivered it to us. They set us up and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 it, then we went to the mountain, had stayed for 2 days. We have returned This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 and when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
watched
 TV This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it did not switch on and did not connect it, we did not know what was happening it? It did not work. I called your staffs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they were not responsible their work. Such poor quality products should not be tolerated
 in a store, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 such high prices. Moreover
, your staffs were not responsible and polite their customers. I assume you will replace the TV set as it is obviously
 faulty I demand a full refund of my money again to this store. However
, as a manager you would be wise to guard against such appalling treatment of you customers Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
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Mukarramova
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Mushtariy
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