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A very important piece of equipment at work broke down. Write a letter to the company’s technician. In your letter

A very important piece of equipment at work broke down. Write a letter to the company’s technician. In your letter 96w1X
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform to you that our company’s computer system has broke down due to which all our critical work is getting delayed. Let me explain you in details, we have bought the system last year from your store which has I6 processor and HD card. I am facing an issue with the network connection. However, I tried connecting with my phone network but nothing seems to be working. I also tried by making changes in the local settings but that also did not made any difference. As we have our production deployment with one of our important client next week and because of this issue all our critical work is in the pending stage. We do not have any backups of the documents which we required for our deployment, everything was feed into the system. I would request to you to please resolve this issue as soon as possible, we need the backups of the documents as it is highly confidential. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Khushboo Kumari
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform to you that our
company
’s computer system has
broke
down due to which all our critical work is getting delayed.

Let
me
explain
you in
details
, we have
bought
the system last year from your store which has I6 processor and HD card. I am facing an issue with the network connection.
However
, I tried connecting with my phone network
but
nothing seems to be working. I
also
tried by making
changes
in the local settings
but
that
also
did not
made
any difference.

As we have our production deployment with one of our
important
client
next
week and
because of this
issue all our critical work is in the pending stage. We do not have any backups of the documents which we required for our deployment, everything
was feed
into the system.

I would request to you to
please
resolve this issue as
soon
as possible, we need the backups of the documents as it is
highly
confidential.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Khushboo
Kumari
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IELTS letter A very important piece of equipment at work broke down. Write a letter to the company’s technician. In your letter

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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