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Tell your friend in finding a job

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Dear Kira, How are things? Hope you are doing well. I'm writing this letter to let you know about an open position for a top management level in one of the reputed local companies in my country. The job position is for Director of Learning and Development which provides a direction to the senior and middle management team on the company's objectives. Also, this role needs to ensure the creation, implementation, and improvement of all business-wide training efforts. Your profile fits into this role because of your relevant educational qualifications, work experience as a senior manager in the same domain at a multinational company. Besides, it suits your personal requirement of a three days' work from home option which you have been looking for since many years. One of my friends is working as a vice-president in the technology department in that company. He can refer you from their internal job portal. If you can forward your latest resume then I'll share it with him. Any questions about this company or role then I'm just a call away. All the best! Best wishes, Naveen
Dear Kira,

How are things? Hope you are doing well. I'm writing

this letter to
let
you know about an open position for a

top management level in one of the reputed local

companies
in my country.

The job position is for Director of Learning and

Development which provides a direction to the senior

and middle management team on the
company
's

objectives.
Also
, this role needs to ensure the creation,

implementation, and improvement of all business-wide

training efforts.

Your profile fits into this role
because
of your relevant

educational qualifications, work experience as a senior

manager in the same domain at a multinational

company
.
Besides
, it suits your personal requirement of

a three days' work from home option which you have

been looking for since
many
years.

One of my friends is working as a vice-president in the

technology department in that
company
. He can refer

you from their internal job portal. If you can forward your

latest resume then I'll share it with him. Any questions

about this
company
or role then I'm
just
a call away.

All the best!

Best wishes,

Naveen
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IELTS letter Tell your friend in finding a job

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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