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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. nVPne
Dear Max, Hope you are doing well and I am glad to hear that you have decided to get a driving license. This decision of yours will make a number of things easier for you. If you will be able to drive then, you will no longer have to depend on public transportation which is going to save a lot of time for you. I would like to recommend you to join a driving school. There is a driving school named A-star driving school in your area and I have heard from my friends that they very good instructors. They also have special course for beginners for $450. I think this would be really great for you. Also, you should start reading the driving rules book as this will help you get familiar with the road signs and other rules. If you know the rules beforehand, it will become quite easier for you to learn driving. If you need any other suggestions or tips I am always here to help. You can reach out to me on my cell phone or just write a letter. Best Regards, Tom
Dear Max,

Hope you are doing
well and
I am glad to hear that you have decided to
get
a
driving
license. This decision of yours will
make
a number of things easier for you. If you will be able to drive then, you will no longer
have to
depend on public transportation which is going to save
a lot of
time for you.

I would like to recommend you to
join
a
driving
school. There is a
driving
school named A-star
driving
school in your area and I have heard from my friends that they
very
good
instructors. They
also
have special course for beginners for $450. I
think
this would be
really
great for you.

Also
, you should
start
reading the
driving
rules
book as this will
help
you
get
familiar with the road signs and other
rules
. If you know the
rules
beforehand, it will become quite easier for you to learn driving.

If you need any other suggestions or tips I am always here to
help
. You can reach out to me on my cell phone or
just
write a letter.

Best Regards,

Tom
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IELTS letter Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

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