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You want something that you can’t buy in your own country. You decide to ask an English friend to help you. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter: say what you want, explain why you want it, suggest how the friend could help.

You want something that you can’t buy in your own country. You decide to ask an English friend to help you. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter: say what you want, explain why you want it, suggest how the friend could help. lW92b

Dear Jane, I hope you are doing well. I was wondering if you could help me with purchasing an important thing, which has not been sold in my country yet, but already available in UK. Recently I have been looking for a new graphic card for my son’s computer on the Internet, and, as I later found out, only one shop sells such computer parts. On top of that this store is located right in your city not far from your accommodation. As you have already known my son is going to celebrate his twelves birthday party in two weeks, so I decided to give him this the newest graphic card to upgrade his computer. Although you may think this is not an appropriate gift for a twelve-year boy, I would say that nowadays at his age every child could not live without computer games, and when he gets this upgrade for his toy he will be over the moon. Anyway, you will do me an invaluable service if you would buy this card and send it to me as soon as possible. An address of the shop and the exact name and number of the card I will send you by email, plus I will transfer money for the purchase and delivery to Ukraine to your Visa card. Looking forward to hearing from you. Warmest wishes, Dan

Dear Jane,

I hope you are doing well. I was wondering if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with purchasing an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing, which has not been sold
 in my country yet
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 already available in UK.

Recently I have been looking for a new graphic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 for my son’s computer on the Internet, and, as I later found out, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one shop sells such computer parts. On top of that
 this store is located
 right in your city not far from your accommodation.

As you have already known my son is going to celebrate his twelves birthday party in two weeks, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I decided to give him this the newest graphic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 to upgrade his computer. Although you may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this is not an appropriate gift for a twelve-year boy, I would say that nowadays at his age every child could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 without computer games, and when he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 this upgrade for his toy he will be over the moon.

Anyway, you will do me an invaluable service if you would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 it to me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. An address of the shop and the exact name and number of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you by email, plus I will transfer money for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 and delivery to Ukraine to your Visa card.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

A determiner is probably missing here: "the Warmest".The Warmest
Warmest
 wishes,

Dan