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You aren’t happy about road quality nearby your home write a letter of complaint to city

You aren’t happy about road quality nearby your home write a letter of complaint to city Q8YX9
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction towards awful condition of roads. My name is Kosha Thakkar and I am a citizen of mahavirnagar area. The capacity of roadway is extremely poor. The streets are very congested which create unbearable traffic problem. Most of the bridges and culverts are old and narrow instead of wide and new. Therefor, it creates hurdle in travelling from one place to another. The situation has been increased in the range of 30km of my location. I really appreciate if you take personal interest in this issue. I would like to request to that kindly take necessary actions such as redevelopment of Ruth and increase quality of street. Looking forward for your positive actions to curb this issue. Yours faithfully,
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction towards awful condition of roads. My name is
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Kosha
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Thakkar and
I am a citizen of
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mahavirnagar
area.

The capacity of roadway is
extremely
poor. The streets are
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very
congested which create unbearable traffic problem. Most of the bridges and culverts are
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old
and narrow
instead
of wide and new. Therefor, it creates hurdle in travelling from one place to another. The situation has
been increased
in the range of
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30km
of my location.

I
really
appreciate if you take personal interest in this issue. I would like to request to that kindly take necessary actions such as redevelopment of Ruth and increase quality of street.

Looking forward for your
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positive
actions to curb this issue.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You aren’t happy about road quality nearby your home write a letter of complaint to city

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  American English
6 paragraphs
130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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