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You aren’t happy about road quality nearby your home write a letter of complaint to city

You aren’t happy about road quality nearby your home write a letter of complaint to city Q8YX9

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction towards awful condition of roads. My name is Kosha Thakkar and I am a citizen of mahavirnagar area. The capacity of roadway is extremely poor. The streets are very congested which create unbearable traffic problem. Most of the bridges and culverts are old and narrow instead of wide and new. Therefor, it creates hurdle in travelling from one place to another. The situation has been increased in the range of 30km of my location. I really appreciate if you take personal interest in this issue. I would like to request to that kindly take necessary actions such as redevelopment of Ruth and increase quality of street. Looking forward for your positive actions to curb this issue. Yours faithfully,

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to express my utter dissatisfaction towards awful condition of roads. My name is Possible spelling mistake found.OSHA
Kosha
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Thakkar, and
Thakkar and
 I am a citizen of Possible spelling mistake found.
mahavirnagar
 area.

The capacity of roadway is extremely
 poor. The streets are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 congested which create unbearable traffic problem. Most of the bridges and culverts are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and narrow instead
 of wide and new. Therefor, it creates hurdle in travelling from one place to another. The situation has been increased
 in the range of Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "30 km"30 km
30km
 of my location.

I really
 appreciate if you take personal interest in this issue. I would like to request to that kindly take necessary actions such as redevelopment of Ruth and increase quality of street.

Looking forward for your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 actions to curb this issue.

Yours faithfully
, 

IELTS letter You aren’t happy about road quality nearby your home write a letter of complaint to city

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

130 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
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