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Dear Mr. and Mrs. Random, I came across your advertisement in the daily newspaper regarding a Hindi tutor that would be available to teach your two young kids over the next year. I had been teaching Hindi near your area and it would be a great opportunity for me if I can get this job and help your kids with Hindi. To give some context on my Hindi skills, I am a native Hindi speaker and have been speaking and writing in it since my childhood. I have also studied Hindi academically that gave me a good fundamental knowledge on some of its advanced concepts as "Lokoktis", "Alankars" etc. Hence, I believe i will be perfect for this job. Apart from being good in Hindi, I also have some good Computer Science skills which I can help your kids as well. I have a diploma in home sciences as well so I can help in cooking some delicous food as well. I have been looking for a good job for quite some time now as I lost my previous job due to covid and haven't been able to get back on my feet. I am also facing a financial crisis as all my savings are almost over and it will be difficult to survive without a job. The advertisement you posted fits my interest and I will be fully dedicated to do my duties sincerely and help your kids achieve their goals. Hoping for a positive response from you. Yours Faithfully, Abhishek Ahuja

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