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Your teacher works in the medical university. You ask some advice about exams for entered university.

Your teacher works in the medical university. You ask some advice about exams for entered university. Ryq6k

Dear Mr Demo, I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about exams which enter the Medical University. You know I graduated last year but I did not enter the university because my mother had been operation so I look after her health. Firstly, I prefer to tell you about my interest I am interested in playing football and basketball so I want to be a football player. However, my parents do not like sports game and they want me to be a dentist. In addition, I participate in chemistry, biology, math and phyusic preparing courses. What do you suggest? If you were I, what would you do? Which subjects need for exam? Could you give some information about exams? Thank you for taking the time for reading this letter. I understang you are very busy person and any advice offer would be greatly appreciate. If it is more helpfull I would be more than happy to discuss over the phone. I would appreciate it if you could give me your advice as soon as Your faithfully, Selena Gomez.

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