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Your friend ask your some advice for daugther's education. You give advice for her daughter.

Your friend ask your some advice for daugther's education. You give advice for her daughter. OgJX7

Dear Lola, Hi! How are you? I am writing in reply to letter asking for advice about your daughter's education. I would suggest that firstly you ask her interest then choose any University which she wants. If I were you, I would send her learning languages courses. However, learning the language is very boring or difficult for young learners but its future will bright. Nowadays a number of courses have in our region. In addition, my sister has a language course which she teach foreign languages for pupils. They can speak three languages: Japan, English and Russian. If you want, sent her this course. I hope this will be help your daughter. So do not worry! There should always will be way out. This advices will be useful for you. Please write to me again to tell how things are going to on or if you need any more help. Love Lucy.

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Love
 Lucy. 