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Your friend ask your some advice for daugther's education. You give advice for her daughter.

Your friend ask your some advice for daugther's education. You give advice for her daughter. OgJX7
Dear Lola, Hi! How are you? I am writing in reply to letter asking for advice about your daughter's education. I would suggest that firstly you ask her interest then choose any University which she wants. If I were you, I would send her learning languages courses. However, learning the language is very boring or difficult for young learners but its future will bright. Nowadays a number of courses have in our region. In addition, my sister has a language course which she teach foreign languages for pupils. They can speak three languages: Japan, English and Russian. If you want, sent her this course. I hope this will be help your daughter. So do not worry! There should always will be way out. This advices will be useful for you. Please write to me again to tell how things are going to on or if you need any more help. Love Lucy.
Dear Lola, Hi! How are you? I am writing in reply to letter asking for advice about your daughter's education. I would suggest that
firstly
you ask her interest then choose any University which she wants. If I were you, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
her learning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
.
However
, learning the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
boring or difficult for young learners
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
its future will bright. Nowadays a number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
have in our region.
In addition
, my sister has a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
which she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "teaches", "taught".
teach
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
for pupils. They can speak three
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
: Japan, English and Russian. If you want,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
her this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I hope this will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
your daughter.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
do not worry! There should always will be way out.
Did you mean "these"?
This
advices will be useful for you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
write to me again to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
how things are going to on or if you need any more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
Lucy.

IELTS letter Your friend ask your some advice for daugther's education. You give advice for her daughter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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