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Your friend is preparing for an exam which you recently took. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest ways to prepare for the exam offer to lend him/her your old study materials give them one piece of advice for doing well in the exam

Your friend is preparing for an exam which you recently took. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest ways to prepare for the exam offer to lend him/her your old study materials give them one piece of advice for doing well in the exam MrPN6
Dear Shama How are you doing and how is your family? I’ve been meaning to write to you for ages. I heard that you are going to take the NEBOSH exam as well. I’m sure you must be exhausted, but not long until it all be over! It was definitely one of the hardest exams I’ve ever taken, but I would be glad to share my advice on how to prepare. First of all, have you thought about joining an institution that specializes in NEBOSH preparation courses? I would suggest enrolling in a preparatory course offered by NEFT in Silver Tower at least two weeks before your exam date. They have really good teachers and their two weeks course will definitely help you understand the concepts in a better way. You might be thinking of self-studying using online resources, but trust me, sometimes it is really hard to motivate yourself. Another thing I strongly recommend is to take two weeks off from work so that you can focus on studying and get ample time to practice. If you want I can send you reference books. I’ve also made notes that you might find helpful. I don’t need them anyways, so it’s not a problem. I hope you find this helpful, let me know if you need any more help. Good luck! Sheyn
Dear
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Shama


How are you doing and how is your family? I’ve been meaning to write to you for ages. I heard that you are going to take the
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NEBOSH
exam
as well
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m sure you
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must
be exhausted
,
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but
not long until it all be over! It was definitely one of the hardest exams I’ve ever taken,
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but
I would be glad to share my advice on how to prepare.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, have you
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thought
about joining an institution that specializes in
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NEBOSH
preparation courses? I would suggest enrolling in a preparatory course offered by
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NEFT
in Silver Tower at least two weeks
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before
your exam date. They have
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
teachers and their two weeks course will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you understand the concepts in a better way. You might be thinking of self-studying using online resources,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
trust me,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
it is
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to motivate yourself.

Another thing I
strongly
recommend is to take two weeks off from work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that you can focus on studying and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
ample time to practice.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you want I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you reference books. I’ve
also
made notes that you might find helpful. I don’t need them anyways,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it’s not a problem.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you find this helpful,
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let
me know if you need any more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Good
luck!

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Sheyn
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IELTS letter Your friend is preparing for an exam which you recently took. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest ways to prepare for the exam offer to lend him/her your old study materials give them one piece of advice for doing well in the exam

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
221 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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