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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my mobile phone yesterday. First of all, let me describe it for you. It is made of glass with a small skretch in the back which has a batman cover that my child bought it in my birthday. I am currently in GT island. While I was taking a family call in the shore, my child start crying so I ruched into him immediately After that I realised that my phone is missing, I have searched and asked around about it but, all in vain. The phone was already taken by somebody. I would like to the company to reimbursed the value of the phone as soon as possible since my holiday will end up the next week. Therefore, I need it to resume my busniesses. Please consider my request at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my mobile
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
yesterday.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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let
me
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describe
it for you. It
is made
of glass with a
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small
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skretch
in the back which has a batman cover that my child
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bought
it
The usual preposition for "birthdays" is "on". Revise: "on my birthday".
in my birthday
.

I am
currently
in GT island. While I was taking a family call in the shore, my child
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start
crying
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so
I ruched into him immediately After that I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
that my
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phone
is missing, I have searched and asked around about it
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but
, all in vain. The
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phone
was already taken by somebody.

I would like to the
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company
Did you mean "to reimburse"?
to reimbursed
the value of the
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phone
as
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soon
as possible since my holiday will
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end
up the
next
week.
Therefore
, I need it to resume my
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busniesses
.

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Please
consider my request at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter insurance company to inform them

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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