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To ask somebody for apologize losing thing

To ask somebody for apologize losing thing 73RXn
Dear sir I am writing to apologize you had given me a certificate an Ielts where l had studied your country. l regret to inform l cannot find it. I remembered clearly, it had been in my bag before, which I had purchased it in a buteque. Certificate is an important and necessary. I am going to work our country with it. Many lessons would be given me, if l showed it my boss. And my salary are being raised. This desicion were investigated by government. I am asking for you to dublicate it. If you send me a certificate'dublicate, I would be happy really. really I hope my asking can be solved soon. Your pathfully Sara Thompson.
Dear sir

I am writing to apologize you had
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given
me a certificate an
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Ielts
where l had studied your country.
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l
regret to inform l cannot find it.

I remembered
clearly
, it had been in my bag
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before
, which I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
it in a
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buteque
.

Certificate is an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
and necessary.

I am going to work our country with it.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
lessons would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
me, if l
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
it my boss. And my salary are
being raised
.

This
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desicion
were investigated
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.

I am asking for you to
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dublicate
it. If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me a certificate'
Possible spelling mistake found.
dublicate
, I would be happy
really
.
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really


I hope my asking can
be solved
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soon
.

Your
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pathfully
Sara Thompson.
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IELTS letter To ask somebody for apologize losing thing

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
118 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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