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In my experience, you could use a mosquito net over the bed if your bedroom isn’t air-conditioned. In addition, when you go out, not only spray insect repellants on your exposed skin, you can but also spray on your clothing because mosquitoes also find it easy to bite through thin clothing. Besides, make sure you keep your home and surroundings clean without any junk or wastes. Finally, I reckon that you should mobilize the participation of communities and mass organizations involved in malaria control and propaganda and education to raise awareness and change people's behaviour on malaria prevention.
In my experience, you could
use
a mosquito net over the bed if your bedroom isn’t air-conditioned.
In addition
, when you go out, not
only
spray insect
repellants
on your exposed skin, you can
but
also
spray on your clothing
because
mosquitoes
also
find it easy to bite through thin clothing.
Besides
,
make
sure you
keep
your home and surroundings clean without any junk or wastes.
Finally
, I reckon that you should mobilize the participation of communities and mass organizations involved in malaria control and propaganda and education to raise awareness and
change
people
's
behaviour
on malaria prevention.
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IELTS letter write a paragraph measure prevent malaria

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  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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