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Today, I am writing this email with the excuse of continuing the distribution agreement with his company.

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I am Marton. You and I had a meeting last week to discuss the cooperation process between two campanies on a new project. Today, I am writing this email with the excuse of continuing the distribution agreement with his company. For you to understand more about the contact, I have attached a daft with the letter. So, I suggest you read through the draft contact that I attached to that letter. In addition, I have some made changes to the contact to make the draft more authentic with the current time. In order to br able to discuss the details of the discussions, I hope we will have another meeting next Tuesday morning, the location of which is the address we last met. I really want we can have a face to face discussion. Thank you for reading this letter and look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Morton
I am
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Marton
. You and I had a meeting last week to discuss the cooperation process between two
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campanies
on a new project.
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Today
, I am writing this email with the excuse of continuing the distribution agreement with his
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company
.

For you to understand more about the contact, I have attached a daft with the letter.
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So
, I suggest you read through the draft contact that I attached to that letter.

In addition
, I have
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some
made
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
to the contact to
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make
the draft more authentic with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
time.

In order to
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br
able to discuss the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the discussions, I hope we will have another meeting
next
Tuesday morning, the location of which is the address we last met. I
really
want we can have a face to face discussion.

Thank you for reading this letter and look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Best regards,

Morton
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IELTS letter Today, I am writing this email with the excuse of continuing the distribution agreement with his company.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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