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Your friend is moving to your neighbourhood next weekend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - offer to help your friend move - Explain when and how you can help - give them some useful information about the local area

Your friend is moving to your neighbourhood next weekend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - offer to help your friend move - Explain when and how you can help - give them some useful information about the local area q6GOP
Dear John, How're you? How is family? I'm thrilled to pieces about your decision to relocate to my neighborhood. Anyway, I am glad we'll finally be neighbours, i can't wait to show you around. Thankfully, I'm on a two-week annual leave from work, therefore, I have enough time at hand, assisting you in moving your luggage wouldn't be a problem. I hope you won't mind if i come over to your place with my truck on friday to help you pack luxury items such as TV and other electronics Although, I had the intention of travelling to the United States but I will change my plans so as to avail myself. Since you know how much strength I have, why don't you just assign the heavy duties to me? Carrying furniture wouldn't be a hassle at all. By the way, have you heard a few things about this great neighborhood? Clearly, it is known for its security but please avoid late-night movement because of the recent robberies that occurred. Luckily, a new superintendent has been assigned and he can be contacted anytime of the day. Anyway, let me know what you think about my offer. See you soon Your friend, Jack
Dear John,

How're you? How is family? I'm thrilled to pieces about your decision to relocate to my neighborhood. Anyway, I am glad we'll
finally
be
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.
neighbours
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
can't wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
you around.

Thankfully
, I'm on a two-week annual
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leave
from work,
therefore
, I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
time at hand, assisting you in moving your luggage wouldn't be a problem. I hope you won't mind if
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over to your place with my truck on
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friday
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you pack luxury items such as TV and other
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
electronics


Although, I had the intention of travelling to the United States
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my plans
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
avail myself. Since you know how much strength I have, why don't you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
assign the heavy duties to me? Carrying furniture wouldn't be a hassle at all.

By the way, have you heard a few things about this great neighborhood?
Clearly
, it
is known
for its security
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
avoid late-night movement
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the recent robberies that occurred. Luckily, a new superintendent has been
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
assigned and
he can
be contacted
anytime of the day.

Anyway,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know what you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about my offer.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
soon


Your friend,

Jack
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IELTS letter Your friend is moving to your neighbourhood next weekend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - offer to help your friend move - Explain when and how you can help - give them some useful information about the local area

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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