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Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while visiting one of their stores.

Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while visiting one of their stores. 75bJ2

Dear Sir/Madam, I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner in which you stage your products. Allow me to elaborate. Last week, while shopping at your west end location, I noticed that your center was playing an extremely graphic movie to demonstrate the visual capabilities of a new television model. The day I was in your store, my children were exposed to the violence you allowed to be screened. I am aware children are not your company’s target market, but you have to acknowledge that they do visit your stores regularly with their parents. I trust you can empathize with my situation. Thus, I am expecting you to take immediate action by changing the material you use in your displays. I am also expecting you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen. Your timely attention to this matter is needed, Ryan

Dear Sir/Madam,

I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner in which you stage your products. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Allow
 me to elaborate.

Last week, while shopping at your west This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 location, I noticed that your center was playing an extremely
 graphic movie to demonstrate the

visual capabilities of a new television model. The day I was in your store, my children were exposed
 to the violence you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to be screened
. I am aware children are not your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s target market, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 acknowledge that they do visit your stores regularly
 with their parents.

I trust you can empathize with my situation. Thus
, I am expecting you to take immediate action by changing the material you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 in your displays. I am also
 expecting you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen.

Your timely attention to this matter is needed
,

Ryan