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As a director of Dino Conti Ice Cream, write a proposal document to your CEO to give your choice and argu for each option

As a director of Dino Conti Ice Cream, write a proposal document to your CEO to give your choice and argu for each option 0p739

From: Director of Dino Conti Ice CreamTo: CEO of Dino Conti Ice CreamSubject: Investment planDear Sir, To solve our current problems and enable Dino Conti to become a competitive international business, I propose a investment of $3 million. Firstly, it might be a good idea to export to China and Russia with $1. 2 million. In the fact, China and Russia are the great business countries and has the largest population. So the demand in this countries is really high. If we export our products in China and Russia, it's sure that we will earn a lot of money. After that, I suggest we should making the company more green with $800. 000. Because everyone always take care of our products qualities. They have to be sure that our products are produced cleanly, they will buy them. So, we need to invest the making the company more green in order to make our customer trust and improve our image and sales. Finally, perhaps we should improve the products's packing. Because our objects of market aim at young people. They will easily attracted to outstanding things and we will increase our sales if we improve the products's packing. What do you think about my proposal? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Quynh

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 more green with $800. 000. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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buy
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, we need to invest the making the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
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make
 our customer trust and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
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 our image and sales. Finally
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 packing. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
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. They will easily
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 the Did you mean "product's" or "products'"?product'sproducts'
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 packing. What do you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about my proposal? Looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Best regards, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphQuynh.Quynh!Quynh?Quynh:Quynh,Quynh;
Quynh