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You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation

You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation 2l35k
Dear Sir or Madam, I have been a satisfied customer of your airline, but Tam writing to complain about the loss of my luggage in the airport since my arrival on 20th MAY 2020, till now I didn't receive my lost luggage, which are a pink suitcase and a small black snapback. As a result, this matter caused me the following string of problems during my holiday. my lost luggage contains my clothing, books, camera and other vital and intimate things. On this point, Iwas obliged to buy all the lost items from a local shop at a very high price. I would be most grateful if you look at this matter at your earliest cinvenience, as I would be extremely pleased if you could reimburse me the cost of the missing itemsthat cost $450. Thanks for your consideration. Kind regards, Nawel
Dear Sir or Madam, I have been a satisfied customer of your airline,
but
Tam writing to complain about the loss of my luggage in the airport since my arrival on 20th MAY 2020, till
now
I didn't receive my lost luggage, which are a pink suitcase and a
small
black
snapback
.
As a result
, this matter caused me the following string of problems during my holiday.
my
lost luggage contains my clothing, books, camera and other vital and intimate things. On this point,
Iwas
obliged to
buy
all the lost items from a local shop at a
very
high price. I would be most grateful if you look at this matter at your earliest
cinvenience
, as I would be
extremely
pleased
if you could reimburse me the cost of the missing
itemsthat
cost $450. Thanks for your consideration. Kind regards,
Nawel
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IELTS letter You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, complaining about this situation saying why it caused you problems seeking suitable compensation

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