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This is part of a letter you’ve received from a manager of a restaurant. ….We appreciate that you had chosen our restaurant to hold your birthday party. I am writing to inquire if you could give us some feedback. Are you satisfied with our food and service? What do you think about our furniture and decoration? Also, it would be very helpful if you could give us some suggestions to improve. Now write a letter responding to him.

This is part of a letter you’ve received from a manager of a restaurant. …. We appreciate that you had chosen our restaurant to hold your birthday party. I am writing to inquire if you could give us some feedback. Are you satisfied with our food and service? What do you think about our furniture and decoration? Also, it would be very helpful if you could give us some suggestions to improve. Now write a letter responding to him. Q2pl1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to give you some feedbacks on your restaurant. Firstly, I would like to thank you for your dedicated service. That made me have a great and memorable birthday party. Most of my friends and I loved our mains because they were well-presented and delicious. However, there was a problem with the desserts which were too sweet. Hence, it is better if you remind your chef not to add a lot of sugar into fruit cake. As a result, your customers can enjoy the fantastic taste of natural fruit. Secondly, I was sastified with your furniture and decoration. Every thing was mostly located suitably. Therefore, when coming to your place, I felt extremly comfortable and relaxed. Nevertheless, I consider that it can become more perfectly unless you put small trees near the stage. I hope that I have been able to answer all of your questions. Once again, big thanks to you and your staff for making my birthday become more distinctive and unforgetable. Yours faithfully, . . . .
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to give you
some
feedbacks on your restaurant.

Firstly
, I would like to thank you for your dedicated service. That made me have a great and memorable birthday party. Most of my friends and I
loved
our mains
because
they were well-presented and delicious.
However
, there was a problem with the desserts which were too sweet.
Hence
, it is better if you remind your chef not to
add
a lot of
sugar into fruit cake.
As a result
, your customers can enjoy the fantastic taste of natural fruit.

Secondly
, I was
sastified
with your furniture and decoration. Every thing was
mostly
located
suitably
.
Therefore
, when coming to your place, I felt
extremly
comfortable and relaxed.
Nevertheless
, I consider that it can become more
perfectly
unless you put
small
trees near the stage.

I hope that I have been able to answer all of your questions. Once again,
big
thanks to you and your staff for making my birthday become more distinctive and
unforgetable
.

Yours
faithfully
, .
.
.
.
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IELTS letter This is part of a letter you’ve received from a manager of a restaurant. …. We appreciate that you had chosen our restaurant to hold your birthday party. I am writing to inquire if you could give us some feedback. Are you satisfied with our food and service? What do you think about our furniture and decoration? Also, it would be very helpful if you could give us some suggestions to improve. Now write a letter responding to him.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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