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you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sport center that you visit.write a letter to the sports center manager.in your letter.

you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sport center that you visit. write a letter to the sports center manager. in your letter. 1nqoX
Respect Sir I am writing a letter with regard changing room in a sports at the spirt sports center. I hope you are well. sir my view of point this letter. I am not satisfied with the changing room. I am very disappointed. I am not comfortable work. I have been using the gym at your center for several year now wouldn't maintenance work As a result paint is peeling off the walls. The windows mirror all broken and Lightning are not proper work. I am working man I am going to gym 7. 30 pm till 9, clock pm I am not proper comfortable work regarding this sports centers. The Neglected state of changing room make me think that do not care about your customers. I feel that being treated like farmer and animal. I ways tha you are putting are health risk. It seem that the profit is more important than the customers Experience. I suggested that a full refurbishments is required and that you should consider some form of compensation for members. Your faithfully Rahul
Respect Sir

I am writing a letter with regard changing room in
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a sport" or simply "sports"?
a sports
at the
Possible spelling mistake found.
spirt
sports center.

I hope you are well.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
sir
my view of point this letter. I am not satisfied with the changing room. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
disappointed.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am not comfortable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been using the gym at your center for several year
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
wouldn't maintenance
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
As a result
paint is peeling off the walls. The windows mirror all broken and Lightning are not proper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. I am working
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
I am going to gym 7. 30 pm till 9, clock pm I am not proper comfortable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
regarding this sports centers.

The Neglected state of changing room
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that do not care about your customers. I feel that
being treated
like farmer and animal.
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I ways
Possible spelling mistake found.
tha
you are putting are health
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
. It
Did you mean "seems"?
seem
that the profit is more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
than the customers Experience.

I suggested that a full
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "refurbishment"?
refurbishments
is required
and that you should consider
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
form of compensation for members.

Your
faithfully


Rahul
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IELTS letter you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sport center that you visit. write a letter to the sports center manager. in your letter.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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